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What A Week: A New President, A Great Workshop Collaboration & 9600 words.

Posted by Bonnie on 7th November 2008

A very special week.

A NEW PRESIDENT-ELECT!

After three months of presidential campaign uncertainty, Barack Obama became our 44th President.

We woke up yesterday and YES, YES HE IS the President Elect. So slowly we are adjusting the conversations. Who will he choose to help him run the country? Now we can enjoy listening to the president again. It’s been a long time coming for me. I’ve gotten to tuning Bush out. It’s so good to care again.

We are off to the Inauguration in January. Pictures to follow…

I have share a great post from Becca’s describing Obama’s election moment in Grant Park. It’s what I wanted to write but she’s captured it. Enjoy!

Week One: NaNoWriMo

As for writing, my novel this month, I am up to date at this moment. We are coming to the end of the first week one and I have 9600 words and counting. I am luxuriating in the need for words, for details, so I’ve been slowing down to put meat on my characters. Two main characters: one I know well, based on me and one I once knew and she’s the challenge. Actually everything about this is a challenge, a stimulating challenge.

So far I’ve been working solo with some sharing here and with a few online buddies, but I’m thinking a face-to-face session being planned for Tuesday might be fun. It’ just great to be able to write this here on the computer. Some people still write with a pen and a yellow pen. Bravo, but the computer opened up my writing life. As a lefty, I had no writing stamina, but here, I can get my ideas down as I create them.

NWP off to San Antonio

As we move closer to San Antonio and the National Writing Project’s annual convention I am presenting two workshops with members of other sites. We have been meeting virtually using email, Google Docs, and conference calls and it’s been great.

I hope the workshop participants enjoy the presentations as much as we are enjoying the rich collaborations.

DOVER INSERVICE

And my Digital Storytelling workshop is going well. We have completed 4 of 6 sessions and the group of 4 is a true group! More important than learning the web tool, Photo Story 3, seems to be the rich conversation about the texts and their connection to the photos.

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Remembering the Start of SI’08:Slice of Life Tuesdays

Posted by Bonnie on 9th August 2008

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DS Workshop Reflections To Chew On

Posted by Bonnie on 26th April 2008

I’ve presented my digital storytelling workshop many times and still there’s always a need to keep it fresh, keep me fresh and on my toes.

I got the Common Conference invitation from my old pal Jane before I left for Israel and sent BOCES my bio and blurb while I via email before we returned, but it was way too early to do anything about it except start to simmer the pot way in the back of my brain. After all there were things coming way sooner than the end of April and I must enjoy the torture of procrastination.

Okay, we are now entering the week of the conference. I have met with the BOCES coordinator, signed on dotted lines in front of an authorized notary and even promised to send them special delivery, a copy of my passport. Things are getting very official, even for a conference presenter.

It’s Monday and the conference is Friday and my deadline is Thursday because that’s the day I will be in New Paltz to get my handout packet xeroxed and of course I develop a head cold/allergy attack Tuesday that takes me through lunch on Wednesday but miraculously, lunch with Marie France at Strawberry Place in Nyack clears my head and I return home refreshed and ready to tackle my challenge.

I spend hours blending fragments together and thinking a lot and not feeling anymore guilt. Nice.

I want to keep the NFA piece that I’ve been using, “Taking Advantage of Time”, even though it’s not as gritty as other pieces. But the power of her voice, transforms the text and that’s magical for me. I watched her closely throughout the process and even though I’m not exactly sure where some of her images and sophisticated word choices came from, her piece is powerful in its full force of words, images and music.

As the piece finishes, I ask the group ( a large one in the first session) to write about what strikes them about her DS piece and everyone, with the exception of two buddies in the back are ready to work with me. (I have to remember to use my digital recorder to document the responses.) I get great responses.

Participants are mining their initial reactions. A man in the back of the classroom remembers his international experience working with engineers new to English and now in a second career as a teacher considers the ELL students he has in his math class and wonders how he could use ds with them.

With my new use of Apple’s Keynote, I’ve added a slide of Lisbet’s text and paragraph by paragraph participants read and comment on the text and layer the text back into the ds and what happened to this text as it was mixed with the media elements.

We look at the DS elements slide I have created one that’s more user friendly than the one in the handout packet, borrowing from Trace and Joe.

Then it’s time for the group to get messy and write. As always, there are some clearly uncomfortable to be writing as a writers, others thrilled to have the chance and some on the fence. I have the prompt on a slide and I don’t want the two in the back to get more distracted with the full packet quite yet. So everyone writes to my standard, Joe Lambert’s fork-in-the-road, a la Robert Frost and there’s plenty of time for them to get into this. They are writing, thinking and it’s silent. There’s an 1 1/2 hour block and then a good snack break almost an hour. So there’s no rushing to the next thing. Nice.

I slowly move them to revision. Pointing back to their draft, mining for golden nuggets. and then selecting one to begin again. The revision can continue from the original or it could something that’s brand new. Always their choice and I want to keep stressing that they should write free and not worry about the next stage, the share. It’s up to them what they share. The key is the process. What happens to them in this writing experience and what could it mean to their students?

They write again. 10 minutes. Then the share. My favorite time of the workshop. Pairs, trios, I encourage strangers to get together and most people seem to be introducing themselves and that’s fantastic. Some are reading their pieces, some are sharing their process . I let them set the time limit now.

The conversation that follows feels like a bonding experience for the group. I am not using my digital recorder again, not scripting this, ugh. Each group shares their writing experience and many offer thoughts and questions. One guy wonders how what ds would look like with natives and I smile. I have Alison’s back in the mix to share next.

The reflections are rich and the many are thrilled to have been writing and unearthing personal life moments. We talk about private/personal, other prompts for different kids, time lines and how to best deal with the teacher and technology. It’s also a perfect opportunity to talk about how I use this prompt with teachers in the HVWP’s SI in a story circle and why this prompt is so good at opening the door to authentic writing.

Now to Alison’s piece. Here I offer them the booklet. I have them read Alison’s early draft and then the final one before they see her DS. I’m cruious to see what they think about her process as a writer and why she has made the changes to the piece that she did and then how the writing works with the media elements.

A thoughtful woman is blown away by Alison’s commitment to the piece as she moved from the early to final draft and the conversation focuses on the commitment to audience and the life experiences of the student brought alive in this process. Alison’s tribute to a family friend lost to cancer is powerful on the page and then the ds piece takes the group to that next layer. We are able to talk here about publishing to an authentic audience. Alison was able to bring Neil’s family a DVD and share the her tribute with them. She presented with me at a faculty meeting and at NYSEC but her most powerful experience was with his family.

It’s a great chance too, to talk about how teachers new to the tech, like I was with Alison can get comfortable with it slowly. Learning first with easy software( Photo Story 3 for the PC and Imovie for the Apple!). I share my one-on-one experience with Alison and a few other students before introducing DS into larger groups. One teacher lights up with that suggestion.

Sad to say, that moving back and forth between DS on disks and the Keynote presentation, I pressed the wrong key and the computer and LCD projector started fighting. I lost the promise of taking the group through a few slices on the PC software. And one woman was so disappointed. I promised to support her as best I could with an email. And thrown off as I was sprinting to the end I lost a bit of my concentration with the last few comments. But as the group left a number stayed behind, passing up a spot of the food line to continue on with me. NICE.

As everyone left I needed to figure out what went wrong and get ready for the next session. I grabbed a Jenny Craig protein bar, my water bottle and I took a walk to the cafeteria. Break time. I ran into more of the group and spent time answering questions. What a great time!

Workshop two was a breeze. No computer glitches, the group was much smaller and I was relaxed and with them. Success and exhaustion. I had a long ride to Paramus and I needed something to eat. Diet coke, pretzels, frozen yogurt, bathroom breaks along the Thruway and Tuvia waiting to get me to take a nap before we left for dinner in Hoboken.

Great day!

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Connecting with my DS Piece

Posted by Bonnie on 17th December 2007

I can’t say off the top of my head, just how many pieces I’ve created, but this one has taken almost  a year to finish and I’m not quite there yet.  I think I began it last year around Christmas.  Why, you ask?  Well I didn’t have Kevin pushing me to get it done.  I did have my own guilty voice in my the back of my head wanting to get it done, but I can put that voice off and just keep feeling guilty.  I wondered why I was holding back.  Actually, I have another one after this piece that’s even older, but my customer isn’t connecting with me and pushing for it to be done.So why?  Well it’s not my piece in the usual sense.  It’s for a website to advertise a beauty salon.  But it’s the salon I use and it’s owned by the daughter of an old friend.  But it’s taken me a long time to get comfortable with my own process in creating it.  Just yesterday as I found some music and moved it back and forth between programs I was getting excited.  I was taking control of it and I liked it as it came together.Of course, I didn’t write the text, and there was a lot of video to choose from and I am getting the hang of my new software and when I realized that I couldn’t use all the fancy stuff I have, I calmed down and just kept it simpler.  So yes, I am almost ready to show to Elyse and yes, I hope she likes it, but I like it and that’s what I needed to move on.  I was feeling like I was beyond my expertise but I’m okay.  It’s good, I think.  I will put it here soon.

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We Can’t Get Away From the Next Mountain to be Climbed

Posted by Bonnie on 22nd November 2007

I am starting to write the text for a new digital story. I really should be focused on a project that has been with me for almost a year and I have no more excuses to get to it.

It’s a  digital piece  to showcase the work of a beauty salon for their website. I am branching out into the commercial world.  But I don’t know where to begin.  I open my project on Final Cut Pro and  play with my collection of photos and video and then I close it up and procrastinate. I have to just DO IT! But it’s a new genre for me, one that I am moving in cautiously. I need to just DO IT and move on.

The piece I feel comfortable working on is pushing itself out and demanding my attention,  a piece that comes from my experience last week at the NWP conference and what made that one different from the others. The inspiration comes from Chico, once again. The rich network that I am a part of, moving from my workshop to Kevin’s and feeling connected to both, that’s what I am calling myself to work on.

Kevin maybe shadowing this movemest as well, but I think it demands a digital story as opposed to using Voice Thread.

At this very moment,  I have to get ready now, to travel home for Thanksgiving, but I am taking my voice recorder along just in case I strike a line of mental ore.

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My Dog and Pony Show Have LCD Projector, Will Travel

Posted by Bonnie on 18th October 2007

  I was invited to present my ds workshop by Erica Charnowsky, a great TC, at her school district.  As a rule, we don’t accept these one shot, superintendent conference offers, but for Erica, at a fresh school for us, Croton on the Hudson, why not?  Right in my backyard.

I was scheduled for the session after lunch, one of ten tech sessions to choose from and I had 6 participants.  Was it worth it?  Why not.  A perfect day to travel, 6 very enthusiastic teachers and a bit of money for my time and travel and it was for Erica as well.

I have this tough issue, what should I show.  I have so many choices.  There was a time when all I had was the CDS tutorial, Momnotmom and then my first piece and Momnotmom and then Allison’s piece and…slowly…more and more…   I began with Martha’s NFA intro and then Lisbeth as usual, even though I considered using Helen’s but I thought is was thinner.  I don’t know.  Too much to chose from.  THey watched the pieces and then talked about what they noticed and we move through the DS elements. Then I showed Edgardo’s and we talked about it.  I think Helen’s would have been better, I don’t know.

Then their fork-in-the road writing began.  Followed by a revision piece and then with so few people we could great a story circle and that was great as they shared the second piece and talked about what changes they made.  They also shared how they use writing with their own students and most of them did write with their kids in ms and elementary classes. Then I moved them to work on a storyboard, to put the text under a photo spot and consider what this would look like in its digital form.  That was a challenge.  I liked putting it back in.

I showed them my poem and probably it would have been better to show them  one of the SUNY pieces I had pulled for this.  I think mine was too personal for a fresh group.

THe superintendent walked in at the end the group was so excited about sharing a piece, they pushed for a return to Lisbeth and she was moved.

I saw Erica before I left and that was good.  She is hoping that something might come from this.  It’s cool yes, or no.

I did share a bit about our ds collaboration and showed them what the software on the mac looks like but I need to start dealing with my pc and using Photo Story 3 for this section of the workshop.  It seems logical.

I just read through my SUNY DS evaluations with Tuvia.  Better than the first time I read them.  Nice.

Okay, another one under my belt! It’s time to get moving to my fancy software and Elyse’s piece.

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